Prompt: Write about what job you would like to do when you are older. Explain why you would like to do that job.These examples show several skill levels and range from a 2 to a maybe 4.
|This student struggles with quality details. Her sentence structure has come a long way this year though!|
|A few of these sentences really touched my heart.|
|This student takes risks with her sentence structure and I admire that.|
|This girl is going places! I love that she really develops her reasons.|
|A teacher in the making, right here!|
|I am talking with this student about making more heartfelt connections.|
|I just love his voice! His writing is a direct reflection of his great personality.|
|We don't have many taxi drivers where we live, so I commend him on branching out.|
|This student has really grown in her writing this year. We have really worked on writing sentences that make sense. We still have some work to do.|
So, this is where we are...
What do you think? Do you teach writing? Do you have any tips for us?